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Day 854 – Combat Baby

“Combat baby, come back baby. Fight off the lethargy, don’t go quietly, combat baby. Said you would never give up easy. Combat baby, come back.” Back in the main novel now, with the icky pudding middle now somewhat gelled and … Continue reading

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Day 11 – Gold Guns Girls

Hit that voice again — finally! Not convinced it will work precisely. It will definitely need refining. But I’m very happy to explore it, see how it plays out.

Covered another key scene, this time trying to concentrate on keeping tension up between the two main characters. It’s kind of hard, because they are essentially friends, and they are both off on an adventure together. That’s supposed to be fun, right? But there is always sources of tension, even if you just kind of ignore it in real life. I’ve got to dig that out though to keep the story interesting. Continue reading

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